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Grinberries

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This is really good! Your WIP link doesn't work, though. Try uploading it to newgrounds (without tagging it or putting styleswap in in the title) and then using that link. Good luck :)

Your entry is appearing in the open category-to avoid being disqualified you need to take 'styleswaped' out of the title. Good luck :)

You need to take 'styleswap' out of the title or it will appear in both categories and it will get disqualified. You have a very confident style for a beginner, wouldn't want you to lose out :)

You need a WIP pic and to take 'styleswap' out of the title, its entering you in open so you'll get disqualified.

You need to take styleswap out the title or it'll enter you into open.

If this is a WIP, you need to take out 'styleswap' from the title - it's appearing in the tag and you could get disqualified.

Dude don't tag your WIP you'll get disqualified

Dude your WIP has turned up in the open category, you need to take the 'B-STYLESWAP' out of the title.

ScavengerKing responds:

Thank you for letting me know. I am still getting the hang of this website

The arm seems bent? It's clearly recognizable, which is better than I could do, but I think that cleaning up your brushstrokes, especially around the mustache, could make this pretty professional.

HollyJ53 responds:

Thank you for this I will take your advice, I'm currently working on the anatomy of body parts I've never been good at arms and legs.

Good anatomy, however the lack of sharp edges or linework makes the characters seem slightly 'out of focus' in comparison with the background. Good colour scheme overall.

NocturnalIllustrate responds:

Thank you for the awesome response and critique. It'll help me in the future. I do have to be honest I actually didn't use any line work. I did the no outline/ line work challenge while doing this to push myself more, but the critique still helps because if I do that again I can compare the new piece to this piece and get better at focus.

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